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love never obtained by ~metaking:iconmetaking:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Transgressive > Spoken Word


to see what can not be touched

her words my mind in thraled

yet mine heart cold

my core caged so my knowledge may be free

yet her warmth melts my armor

with out the fire all i can truly fill for her is greed

greed and want truly are the ingredients that form love

she loves me not

my pride is broken my jealousy fueled

i know the one her heart intangled

we are as brothers

i may fight and lose them both or

stand in the shadows smile and lose myself
©2007-2008 ~metaking
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~weegar:iconweegar: Jan 24, 2008, 1:33:11 AM
ive read this many times and every time i do it reminds me of an old story from when i was younger

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I will now self destruct leaving behind an alfull mess for you to clean up!
have a nice day
~metaking:iconmetaking: Jan 28, 2008, 4:27:01 PM
the girl that was written for only got used, he left her soon after, he was a guy i would trust with my back, but i also knew how he treated girls. Sad this is she dint understand why i wouldn't have her, in the end in my mind it came down to she chose him over me.
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