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Beast by ~metaking:iconmetaking:



we stand here as one
but are hearts alone forever

I rember that ever night
we lost all the happyness

i stand above you beast
return to thy hell demon

are binds of bliss broken
tell me was it worth it




this poem was free writen, i dinst start out anything like this, i have no idea were this came from eather
©2007-2008 ~metaking
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~jenalee:iconjenalee: Jan 31, 2008, 7:45:59 PM
I like it, it's short, but powerful! I suppose it will mean something different to everyone, even you as the artist.

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~metaking:iconmetaking: Feb 1, 2008, 3:58:04 PM Mood: Miserable
this poem was about a girl who i had courted for 3 years, she got mad at me because i came back from thanksgiving with my relatives with a bruised rib and a black eye(my family is kinda hmmmmm hands on to solving problems) and well she went and slept with another guy, i had kept my ass celabit i was going to save myself for marragie, hell i had already worked my fucking ass off for a tux. And she gives her purity to the one person i dispize most, thats what really hurt, i havent spoken to her sence, but i did note, i have finished collage, and have a high paying job, last time i saw her, she looked like hell with 4 kids in tow. in the end..... karma is a lady you dont wanna mess with >.>;
~jenalee:iconjenalee: Feb 2, 2008, 8:30:34 AM
Yes, mate, Karma is a daunting and beautiful thing.
((understand the hands on solving problems thing))
But when you look on how karma has effected others for what they've done, hopefully it just keeps one in line as to what life has to offer. :)

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~metaking:iconmetaking: Feb 4, 2008, 6:44:01 PM
to me personally, it has made it to were i dont try and wrong anyone, if i can help it.